Reflection

1.      Ivy and Zoe:

Their problem is that both of them stand on the same side, and that is they agree that parents should push their kids but not too much. So, for them, they have to seek out the small difference between them; however, that situation makes their sides are not obvious, strong different and opposite. I have seen their annotations and issue paper, I found that their problem is they states their opinions vaguely, and that seems somewhat superficial.

2.      Cassie and 阮郁奇:

Their source is very good and convincing. They want to find some examples in Taiwan to support their topic, but they have difficult doing this. I hope they can find out some powerful examples which are close to us. I think their problem is that they do not really state their opinion and annotation clearly. They could focus on some subjects to study, or we cannot realize the main point.

3.      Kevin and Alice:

Maybe because they had changed their issue, I am not so familiar with their points. Alice talked about many hard sources, and I think she should make it easy for everybody to understand while presentation. Their issue is very interesting, but I hope that they could mention more aspects of privacy on Facebook. And I cannot feel the obvious opposite between them. In the meeting, Kevin said that his difficulty is he thinks people’s attitude toward personal privacy is changing every day, and I agree him. Likewise, Alice thinks this issue is too personal, it depends on users. The issue has to face these difficulties, I think they can try to categorize people’s attitude toward privacy on Facebook and choose what to focus on.    

4.      Perly and Joanne:

I like their issue, but as the professor said, their sources are not strong and professional. Although their presentation was interesting, I didn’t heard any powerful sources in their annotation. And I think they could find some foreign source or essay to support their points of view. Moreover, they could find some cases in company which asks employee to wear uniform, so that their issue will include more aspects of whether uniform is necessary.

5.      Ruby and Emma:

I think our annotation needs more sources of foreign viewpoints. We could find some foreign sources which mention their attitude toward taking abortion. And my annotation1 and 2 are all talking about students themselves, maybe I could try to more aspects, like laws or religion. My comments on Ruby’s annotation is that she talked how sinful abortion is and how many people choose to take abortion, but I think those points will not make people turn to give birth. Maybe she can propose more benefits about giving birth.