Annotation 2
For those students who are pregnant, taking abortion becomes a
serious problem, especially they have not expected the coming of this child.
Some people are against taking abortion because they think it is immoral to
take away a life. Obviously, they stand on the side of the baby; however, I
think people should not neglect that what will have an impact on the mother.
This article in E-Soc Journal has mentioned many aspects of the impact when
young students get pregnant and if they give birth. Below are my summary and
analysis about the impact in the article.
At first, those pregnant students have to face the overwhelming
pressure from their family and during giving birth. In traditional Chinese
family, it is unacceptable for girls to get pregnant when they are not married.
Girl’s pregnancy probably could make the family does not know how to do, and
that they may be hostile to the incident. Besides, the author said an important
point: “Even if giving the birth, the young girls usually do not know how to do
when they face changing their role and the duty of supporting a baby.” The
young mothers probably do not know what their kid needs, and they lack the
experience and patience. Some of them cannot bear the stress then turn to
ignore their child or even become violent toward to children.
Second, whether the environment is
suitable for the mother and baby is also a problem. “When
the young girl decide to give birth, she may endure the pain from the bad living
environment, malnutrition, unemployed, not enough work or suspension, and not
enough train of career or dependency on finance. The possibility her life falls
into poor is higher than those 20s married mothers.” I think it is not easy for
a young girl to take care of herself and the kid, not to mention under the unprepared
and immature environment. The situation may have influence in both of mother’s
and baby’s future.
I think the reason why students’
pregnancy could bring many aspect of impact is that most of students do not expect
they will get pregnant. They have not prepared to be parents, and they have to
receive many mental stress. They are students and parents in the meantime, if
they go to work, then they will have less time with their kids, and that could
result kid’s educational problem. What’s more, the unfriendly stereotype with students’
unmarried pregnancy still exists in the society. So if they cannot overcome
these difficulties, I do not think giving a birth is better way.
Keyword:
Malnutrition: healthy
problem, someone does not get enough nutrition.
Source: 王淑卿 (2004). 青少女未婚懷孕相關因素及其預防輔導策略. 網路社會學通訊期刊,36, Retrieved from: http://mail.nhu.edu.tw/~society/e-j/36/36-43.htm
Original:
即使在寶寶生下來之後，年輕女孩在面臨角色的突然改變及育嬰責任，常常也顯得不知所措（楊佳芳、李孟智，1996）。加上懷孕的任務，有太多的心理任務要完成，其成功與否都將深深影響自己和寶寶的未來。
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I think your points about mother's side do make me think about this issue once again which i do not mention much before. And i think mental problems are much more important for pregnant students since they have their babies in an unexpected way. However, i think if finally girl decides to deliver her kid, she would and should do something to prepare for the upcoming child such as read relevant books about raising children. Then she would know what to do after the child is given birth.
Your point and evidence is great, and it can convince people indeed. Well done!!
回覆刪除However, I want to talk about my thought. I know that for most student who are pregnant, children is not expected. But in these girls, there are many young ladies get pregnant because they didn't think carefully then have sex with boys. I know these unexpected babies may let these students face many problems and difficulties. But these babies are innocent. I really feel sad that these innocent babies have to bear their mothers' fault.
Your drama was really helpful to understand your topic, and your viewpoint was clear.
回覆刪除But your presentation made me think you didn't agree about single parents' ability to raise a child.
Maybe students weren't prepare enough to raise a child without their boyfriends, but that shouldn't include the whole single parents.
I do not support abortion, but I agree with the questions you mention in the article. Because the baby is not in the parent`s expect, there are a lot of environmental problems. It is hard to be a parent and a student in the same time. Maybe it will be good if you use a real story to strengthen your opinion.
回覆刪除I think you talk about many aspects. Taking abortion seems to be the most realistic method. However, it doesn't respect life. And many girls
回覆刪除just don't know the importance of life, because they don't have to take responsibility for the wrong thing she did .
I do not agree with your idea of abortion.I am against abortion because I think it is like destroying a life that is coming to the world. I think there should be another way to solve this problem. Moreover, I think the way your presentation is performed is interesting. I like how you prepared the drama. The drama leaves a strong impression for us on your topic. We can see that you are well prepared and speak in a confident tone. Also I think the arguments and points you hold are clearly delivered, which is persuasive.
回覆刪除It is good to interact with the audience by asking questions. I think that you talk an important point in the presentation: economy. If you don't have enough money, there is nothing can be talked about. The change of roles is also a big problem.
回覆刪除the drama in your presentation is interesting, and by asking questions, u get more attention from the audiences. i'm quite agree with your point, because delivering a child is a serious thing, if u just want the child but don't know or don't have the ability to raise the child, then it's a harm to the child too
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